· Climate
is only one important factor that affects the growth of water borne diseases. “Other
important considerations include socio-demographic influences such as human
migration and transportation; and drug resistance and nutrition; as well as
environmental influences such as deforestation; agricultural development; water
projects; and urbanization. In this era of global development and land-use
changes, it is highly unlikely that climatic changes exert an isolated effect
on disease; rather the effect is likely dependent on the extent to which humans
cope with or counter the trends of other disease modifying influences” (Patz,
2008). Global warming has been causing heavier
rainfall and a faster rate of snow-melt, especially in the Arctic. Since arctic regions are home to more vulnerable ecosystems,
Inuit communities have been reporting more cases of illness attributed to
pathogens that have washed into surface and groundwater. These communities are
experiencing the effects of increasing temperature more strongly than other
areas in the world, perhaps because of an escalated rate of drinking from
infected brook water. "These societies are like crystal balls for
understanding what could happen when these changes start materializing over the
next few decades down south, as they surely will" (James Ford, McGill
University). No matter how useful they will prove to be in preparing for this
climate change, there is a need "for strengthening public health
infrastructure related to disease surveillance, good and water safety, control
of insect vectors and animal reservoirs of disease, and public health outbreak
response" (Greer et al., 2008) “The best defense against
increases in infectious disease burden related to climate change lies in
strengthening existing public health infrastructure. Physicians, as opinion
leaders, can also influence public policy related to greenhouse gas emissions”
(Greer et al., 2008) Improvements in public health infrastructure “include
public health training, emergency response, and prevention and control programs.
Improved understanding is needed of the adaptive capacity of individuals
affected by health outcomes of climate change, as well as the capacity for
populations to prepare a response to projected health outcomes of climate
change. Ultimately, better assessment of water
quality and risk to the drinking water system from the watershed to the tap, as
well as recreational water exposures, will allow for better prevention and
controls to limit the impact of contamination events” (Patz, 2008).

You have a really nice blog! It is well laid out and the topic is really clear. I would expand a bit on some of your points. perhaps add more evidence of increasing temperatures and rainfall. What are the rates of increase? I think you could also add more examples on the physiology page. Explain why the facts you present are important. You have a great graphic! I think you could put it on your last page and talk about it a bit more. Your topic is really important, try to convince the reader of that by adding more content. Also you shouldn't quote so much, I think you could easily rewrite the ideas you are quoting.
ReplyDeleteThe organization of your blog is clear and concise. I recommend writing an introductory post on your Home page, since that is the page the website link directs viewers to (and it is currently blank). In fact, your discussion of climate change would work nicely there, with a lead-in to the Introduction tab in which you can expand on the issue of disease prevalence. It seems like you jump right into the two topics from class instead of giving the viewer enough background. Your original graphic seems well thought-out. I recommend you make it bigger so it's easier to see, and discuss it more directly! I agree with Bear's comment above: your topic is very socially relevant and its implications should be further discussed. I think quoting is fine, it shows that you're referencing the primary readings. Overall, good start! Add some more content and explanations, and you'll be set!
ReplyDeleteI think you have a really good start with your blog. It has a pretty good flow and you're doing a good job of focusing your discussion and not trying to tackle too many topics. Expansion of your points would be fantastic and you could also add some more images and a references page.
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great start on this. I really like the layout and setup. I like all of the images that you have as well. If possible, I would recommend that you go through and maybe paraphrase the quotes so they are easier for non-biology people to understand. I would also put something on your home page so that the first thing you open isn't a blank page. Lastly, I would go more into what we can do to help make the situation better.
ReplyDeleteYou're homepage should focus on your topic. Do some sort of introduction about waterborne diseases. It would be great to also add your opinion of what could be done to mitigate the issue and do some more elaboration on each of your tabs. Overall, you did a great job on the draft. Good luck!
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